For what it's worth, you definitely got this song in the wrong genre, dude.
But it's still good stuff.
Too much for one song
I like the ideas you tried using, but it doesn't really flow into the whole "funk" theme very well. You've got a lot going on; you should try splitting this song into two individual ones at the 1:40 mark.
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